Needs music. I'd suggest some funk, or maybe some nice Lovage. Something to keep in the mood, you know? All this wham, bam, thank you ma'am gets a little old. Maybe some of the trees could be birch, or walnut, or something. Some exotic choices.
I noticed it said I fell into a bottomless grue. Maybe that could be a game. Are grues sexy? Would I want to see a topless grue?